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it's k

The piano at the beginning was good. If you make the piano louder and stronger, it would be a SICK intro

try to make a better transition between the piano part and the techno part.

Good drums at 0:15

7/10
4/5

Nice

Mr-green-apple responds:

its actually not a piano. its like a bell synth with like a pad behind it and yea my transitions are still pretty amatuer. anways thx for listening

the bass

not really a fan of the out of key melody, and the bass is a little weird.

I like the percussion tho!

This isn't trance... I would say it's industrial

And b/c it is industrial, it's not that bad of an industrial song.

You gotta change the melody up tho!

DubHead responds:

k thx ^^

haha

If you listen to my song, "Sound of Memories," the riff you have at the beginning is very similar to a voice in my song.

Anyways, pretty uplifting, hence why I guess it's called SUMMER rave.

I like it, maybe the bass could be a little lighter, tho!

Great job!

4/5
8/10

Blizzaine responds:

Well, dont be saying I stole it because I can compare dates right here
Yours http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/243225
06/01/2009
Mine http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/197314
12/22/2008

Sooo no stealing done on my part (:

And huge bass is what im all about ;)

-Blizz

very well done

All around very good remix!

Great job!

rutRut

MrAw3s0me responds:

thx ;)

Wow

You guys sound JUST LIKE Blink 182

it's scary

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Hahaha thank ya!

okay

you kinda copied other songs... but it's okay

yomeg responds:

Could you send me the name of this song because i've never heard my theme in another song please ?

this is just the eurogate instrument w/ effects

the effects are good, but you used only two instruments... you should vary it a bit. Good use of effects tho!

rutRut

Pizzaroma responds:

Thanks for the review. There are some hints of other instruments, there's 4 overall, but I do understand. I'll try and implement more instruments in newer songs. (Although I do think 2/5 is a tad harsh).

This was mostly a learning experience with automation clips though :D

excellent trance song

good characteristic trance song, maybe lay off the filler with the continuous drums a little bit... you used that about 5 times in that song :)

melody is good, drums good, intro is a little weak but catchy!

9/10, 5/5

KorpzeAudio responds:

Cool, glad you liked it

random notes, but good percussion

I like how you structured this song, but I personally think that the melody is off key and the notes don't really agree. On the other hand, I think your percussion is very good and I think that if you create more of a agreeable melody that this song would be sweet!

Keep it up man,

rutRut

ragingmullet responds:

Alrighty then, lol. Thanks

P.S. I am a drummer so that helps :D

good incorporation of instruments!

I think this is a great start and if you beef up the power of your drums, you can seriously make this a great song!

8/10
4/5

dj_rutRut

Manhart responds:

I am glad you liked it!
I will make the drums much more complex, and switch up the volume, if it is that you meant ?

I've been making songs with Fruity Loops 8 for about 3/4 of a year now! Yay!

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