it's k
The piano at the beginning was good. If you make the piano louder and stronger, it would be a SICK intro
try to make a better transition between the piano part and the techno part.
Good drums at 0:15
7/10
4/5
Nice
it's k
The piano at the beginning was good. If you make the piano louder and stronger, it would be a SICK intro
try to make a better transition between the piano part and the techno part.
Good drums at 0:15
7/10
4/5
Nice
its actually not a piano. its like a bell synth with like a pad behind it and yea my transitions are still pretty amatuer. anways thx for listening
the bass
not really a fan of the out of key melody, and the bass is a little weird.
I like the percussion tho!
This isn't trance... I would say it's industrial
And b/c it is industrial, it's not that bad of an industrial song.
You gotta change the melody up tho!
k thx ^^
haha
If you listen to my song, "Sound of Memories," the riff you have at the beginning is very similar to a voice in my song.
Anyways, pretty uplifting, hence why I guess it's called SUMMER rave.
I like it, maybe the bass could be a little lighter, tho!
Great job!
4/5
8/10
Well, dont be saying I stole it because I can compare dates right here
Yours http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/243225
06/01/2009
Mine http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/197314
12/22/2008
Sooo no stealing done on my part (:
And huge bass is what im all about ;)
-Blizz
very well done
All around very good remix!
Great job!
rutRut
thx ;)
Wow
You guys sound JUST LIKE Blink 182
it's scary
Hahaha thank ya!
okay
you kinda copied other songs... but it's okay
Could you send me the name of this song because i've never heard my theme in another song please ?
this is just the eurogate instrument w/ effects
the effects are good, but you used only two instruments... you should vary it a bit. Good use of effects tho!
rutRut
Thanks for the review. There are some hints of other instruments, there's 4 overall, but I do understand. I'll try and implement more instruments in newer songs. (Although I do think 2/5 is a tad harsh).
This was mostly a learning experience with automation clips though :D
excellent trance song
good characteristic trance song, maybe lay off the filler with the continuous drums a little bit... you used that about 5 times in that song :)
melody is good, drums good, intro is a little weak but catchy!
9/10, 5/5
Cool, glad you liked it
random notes, but good percussion
I like how you structured this song, but I personally think that the melody is off key and the notes don't really agree. On the other hand, I think your percussion is very good and I think that if you create more of a agreeable melody that this song would be sweet!
Keep it up man,
rutRut
good incorporation of instruments!
I think this is a great start and if you beef up the power of your drums, you can seriously make this a great song!
8/10
4/5
dj_rutRut
I am glad you liked it!
I will make the drums much more complex, and switch up the volume, if it is that you meant ?
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